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Contrasts

29 Jan

1.
Peace like a raging sea
Bubbling with the freshness of summer
As cool as the deserts of the sahara
A refreshing hurricane meant just for me

Greater depths deeper heights
Blinding darkness on a winter solistice
Solitude amidst the Oshodi crowd
Highly exalted, i’m humbly proud

I cringe at the deafening silence

My eyes reflexly shut at the glare of the ambient light

Yet i see clearly, like one that has gone blind

Thinking straight, like i just lost my mind

In all this confusion exists a meaning

Find it and make it your inning

Cos behind every play of words

The words always have something to say

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2 Comments

Posted by on January 29, 2012 in Maiden

 

2 responses to “Contrasts

  1. oreoluwade

    May 3, 2012 at 8:48 am

    Good piece. Thought you were going on a quatrain but then you drifted again. Maybe u should try a regular pattern. I like it though, conveys the message of piece.

     
    • hasarla

      May 3, 2012 at 9:21 am

      i sometimes drift from the pattern when i get stuck while writing. else i may end up not finishing it. thanks a lot

       

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